Concerning actuaries, musings, the fine City of York and much derring-do.
Aren't true Haiku supposed to make reference to the seasons and all sort of other crazy rules?
Easily the best haiku ever.
It is true that haikus are traditionally about nature. Mine was a meditation on the nature of life itself.And Maine, your words are too kind. This one's for you:Inside each of us,Tiny Japanese poetsWish to share their dreams
But not as wasted,As the seventeen you usedTo write your riposte.
I thought Badfriend's oneWas much better than anyOf your three attempts.This is boring now.I'm very hungry so I'mOff to cook my tea.
No - you are so wrong. Mine were meticulously constructed and great.
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Aren't true Haiku supposed to make reference to the seasons and all sort of other crazy rules?
Easily the best haiku ever.
It is true that haikus are traditionally about nature. Mine was a meditation on the nature of life itself.
And Maine, your words are too kind. This one's for you:
Inside each of us,
Tiny Japanese poets
Wish to share their dreams
But not as wasted,
As the seventeen you used
To write your riposte.
I thought Badfriend's one
Was much better than any
Of your three attempts.
This is boring now.
I'm very hungry so I'm
Off to cook my tea.
No - you are so wrong. Mine were meticulously constructed and great.
Post a Comment